Homepage Opening Update!

[newyorkm3]

I reworked the opening paragraph on the homepage a bit to make it flow a little smoother. There were a couple grammatical hot spots I took care of as well. I won't be offended if my version doesn't get used, I just thought that a site like this should have a well written introduction.

The old version.
DTMPower's presence in the BMW community is nothing short of legend. The DTM media chronicled over the past six years is unparalleled. Over 70,000 members engage in daily discussions related to the marque, so be sure to take a tour of the site and introduce yourself on the forums


My version.

DTMPower and BMW are synergistic with speed and class. The presence of DTMPower within the BMW community is nothing short of legendary. With unparalleled archives of media and technical information, DTMPower has emerged as the premier source for sharing the passion of the blue and white roundel. With over 70,000 active members, we encourage you to join and introduce yourself. Enjoy the ride!

[James]

The change from legend to legendary is something that needs to be done for sure. We'll take the rest into consideration - thank you for your efforts.